bits of iced over rain hit the windshield, roof, bumper
they shine bright as the Northern Star up front
they burn red like Fireflies dancing out back
roads slick and treacherous beckon unwary travelers
with diamond paved paths of possibilities
with dangerous potholes and pitfalls
stars burn crisp and clear in the dark heavens
winking and blinking an indecipherable code
nudging and prodding in the right direction
smiles...i like the code in the stars...and the alliteration in that middle stanza....some cool jaunty rhythm to this as well vanessa....diamond paved pathes of possibilities, for sure...smiles.
ReplyDeleteI love alteration.
Deleteyou really evoke time & place!
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
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Just a "normal" ride home. :)
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