Roaring,
Robbie ran round and round the room,
roving and reaving,
ripping and rampaging,
red rain rinsing reason and rationality,
raising rash responses,
rough,
ravaged,
rude,
raw,
rebellion rampant roses of rage
but he doesn’t remember.
This weekend, we are revisiting a prompt we've done before. We are giving you three words and asking that you add another 33 to them to make a complete 36-word response. You may use the words in any order you choose.
Our three words are:
remember
rain
rebellion
Now you give us yours.
Our three words are:
remember
rain
rebellion
Now you give us yours.
Great alliteration. I love "rampant roses of rage." The whole piece very much reminds me of my son. :)
ReplyDeleteI love alliteration. And that is one of my favorite phrases.
DeleteRidiculous how you resourcefully rolled through to right that (wait...did I get that write?)
ReplyDeleteI did consider using "wr" R's.
Deleterrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....hahahaha.....makes my lips tingle....poor robbie you know....cant remember in the end...
ReplyDeleteThe noise must have been too loud for him.
Deletesigh - I've known kids like Rrrrrrrrobbie. Nice alliteration.
ReplyDeleteThey need big open spaces to run in.
DeleteI love this! Though it must be a chore to keep upwith Robbie.
ReplyDeleteCan you imagine the energy you would need?
DeleteReminds me of watching a four or five year old child running around like a maniac. I can remember being that child, and can understand at this stage of my life why the adults always wanted me to go outside to run around instead!
ReplyDeleteIt's like vibrating all of the time.
DeleteOh I absolutely love the SOUND of that!
ReplyDeleteGlad you could hear it.
DeleteFantastic! What a clever and creative use of the prompt. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI couldn't resist all of the R's.
DeleteSo you've met my toddler?
ReplyDeleteAlso, you had me at alliteration.
Follow your toddler and you won't need a gym.
DeleteToo bad blackout doesn't start with an R.
ReplyDeleteThe closest I can think of is repression.
Deletewonderful: rampant roses of rage
ReplyDeleteRoses always struck me as a bit dangerous.
DeleteThis is great. It reminds me of the Shining. :D
ReplyDeleteYeah, Robbie as a crazed Jack Nicholson - i can see that.
DeleteLike! Love the red rain!
ReplyDeleteI can cloud your vision, though.
DeleteThis is terrific! I love your use of R's. Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteRipping repartee.
DeleteFun with alliteration! Keep the kid, though.
ReplyDeleteHe does seem a bit exhausting.
DeleteI love alliteration. I use it whenever I can and your use here is great. It all fits together perfectly.
ReplyDeleteI can't think of any way to respond in all the same sounds. :(
DeleteI bet you can roll your Rs, too! Clever.
ReplyDeleteI can make car engine sounds, too.
DeleteReal fun to read Robbie. I have two of them at home.
ReplyDeleteYou must have lots of stamina.
DeleteRipper Rita! I mean Vanessa - this had me laughing and so glad I had girls!
ReplyDeleteGirls can be very rambunctious, too.
DeleteAlliteration ftw (:
ReplyDeleteAlliteration absolutely amuses and absorbs.
DeleteAlliterating R's, "Red rain" interesting imagery.
ReplyDeleteRage feels like blood covering my eyes.
DeleteI like this! Great alliteration and rhythm!
ReplyDeleteI was going for a whirlpool of emotion.
DeleteWow!What a great piece & like everybody else I thoroughly enjoyed the alliteration:-)
ReplyDeleteFeels like a dog chasing its tail, doesn't it?
DeleteI love alliteration. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIt is a fun game to play.
DeleteLove the alliteration! So creatively done.
ReplyDeleteIt was different anyway. :)
DeleteI loved this! The alliteration! That Robbie can't remember the "whirlpool of emotion" he caused. It's really great.
ReplyDeleteHe could be a whirling dervish.
DeleteFrenetic pace and impressive alliteration! Wow.
ReplyDeleteJust like Rrrrobbie.
DeleteI see you're all revved up and raring to go. :)
ReplyDeleteRaring to write a limerick.
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