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i bet you had no idea i drank myself into a fish bowl filled with oxblood marbles and knucklebones that overflowed onto the stiff and prickly artificial turf covering the floor of my heart from wall to wall so the sound of steel-toed work boots muffled your screams of ecstasy when my fingers fiddled you
Write a story in exactly 55 words.
lots of interesting texture in this one...but thanks for the glimpse what goes on behind the eyes that fiddle with us...lol
ReplyDeleteNow that was different. I like it.
ReplyDeleteooooh, nice!
ReplyDeleteA love poem? Of sorts. Certainly I love it.
ReplyDeleteFilled with word paintings and sound. Amazing what you accomplish on such a tiny canvas.
ReplyDeleteWas Southern Comfort involved?
ReplyDeleteVanessa Kilmer...TWO WEEKS in a row!
I'm very flattered and honoured!
Not only that, I LOVE everything you do...
I think that this had a nuance of Kink, but you know me...:P
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
The 'wild monkey sex' line in G-Man's 55 has a lot to answer for...
ReplyDeleteThis brought an uncomfortable vision of fish fingers to my mind...LOL
ReplyDeleteIs it just me, or is this one a wee bit obscene? :-)
ReplyDeletequite wet and remarkable 55 ...
ReplyDeleteglad to see you today.
Hmmmm...
ReplyDeleteI've been known to drink myself into a fishbowl or two in my day!
Very interesting on many levels. I adore your writing style, you know.
What a world we live in! If it's not Wild Monkey Sex it's Wild Sex in a Goldfish Bowl. I give you 55 12 out of 10!
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