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Tuesday, January 25, 2011
One Single Impression - quagmire
action movies filled with romantic situations where i save the dragon from the evil princess and we fly off to Jupiter and Mars winging our way around the Milky Way while dodging flood waters rising in the stone tower and kidnappers in a 1930’s style automobile chase after me as i reach the edge of the cliff and run into the air like The Coyote i fall but i don’t splat i am swallowed by the quicksand of chocolate pudding with whipped cream and sprinkles doing back flips dressed in an iridescent green tutu combat boots and a ruby encrusted tiara while old boyfriends look me up on Facebook to ask if i have their car keys and a favorite pair of socks with the hole in the heel and in their hearts as we dance under the Disco ball spinning me across the stones bridging the river Styx where i meet Hades who gives me a daisy that i use to play he loves me not he loves me passionately with a bow on top
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that was a pretty frickin amazing ride...love the combat boots tutu...and the coyote...great write..
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of doing those continuous line drawings in art class.
ReplyDeletehmmm..quicksand of chocolate pudding with whipped cream... i got stuck there somehow... cool and fast paced write nessa
ReplyDeleteSo much fun reading this, Nessa, absolutely love it! :)
ReplyDeleteWow, but fun. I did feel a need to breathe by the end. :-)
ReplyDeleteWhen I finished, I felt like I'd been holding my breath. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteWow! I agree to Brian, what an awesome ride. Have a wonderful day :)
ReplyDeleteWow, what a ride, that is what I call covering all genres.;))
ReplyDeletexoxo
Sounds like a crazy dream. I like it.
ReplyDeleteHey, that was MY dream last night! How did you know? Except one thing, you forgot the moving truck driving across the Gulf of Mexico to deliver furniture to our new house.
ReplyDeletewow nessa you sure do encourage me to think funny things non-stop like i always tell folk that my mind runs non-stop cause i'm thinkin all the time even when i'm sleeepin i do believe anyway i like yours a lot it made me think of my poor deceased ex-mother-in-law and how she might have had some of my old army stuff still that i left in her basement when her daughter and i went to texas i miss my dog tags and the field jacket the most but i'm sure glad my army boots are here up in the attic which reminds me the attic of my mind says i should stop cause i doubt you would read much more
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