Wednesday, September 01, 2010

Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Secrets

dark mists swirl around
choking happiness, joy, love
bring on the sunshine


 Write a haiku based on the week’s theme.

“The basics: Haiku is simple! 
It is 3 non-rhyming lines of 5, 7, and 5 
syllables respectively 
(a great way to use your fingers!)”
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  1. AnonymousWed Sep 01, 12:36:00 AM EDT

    Very nice. I need to go choke down a woo woo now :)

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  2. RAWed Sep 01, 03:34:00 AM EDT

    Yup, bring on the sunshine! Nice haiku. Have a wonderful day.

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  3. Brian MillerWed Sep 01, 06:06:00 AM EDT

    if we did not have the darkness though would we appreciate the light as much?

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  4. UnknownWed Sep 01, 06:21:00 AM EDT

    you summed it all so beautifully in a simple haiku. I bow to your talent!

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  5. EG CameraGirlWed Sep 01, 08:06:00 AM EDT

    Yep, bring on the sunshine!

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  6. ZuzanaWed Sep 01, 09:52:00 AM EDT

    I have never written any haiku and probably would be quite bad at it, but I like your non-rhyming expressions.;)
    xo

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  7. MelliWed Sep 01, 10:12:00 AM EDT

    Oooooooh... such a DARK view today... It's SUNNY at my house! And IN my house too. I hope you find your sunshine.

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  8. CherylWed Sep 01, 10:29:00 AM EDT

    Lovely haiku today Nessa. A secret surprise.

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  9. Susan CookWed Sep 01, 10:30:00 AM EDT

    dark secrets? Sounds ominous. Interesting.

    Hope the sun comes out soon!

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  10. Noe Noe Girl...A Queen of all Trades.Wed Sep 01, 11:33:00 AM EDT

    Love the sunshine!
    <><

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  11. julianaWed Sep 01, 03:40:00 PM EDT

    i know those mists. but there is always a promise of sunshine

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  12. Amanda MooreWed Sep 01, 06:16:00 PM EDT

    love that last line "bring on the sunshine! Great Haiku Nessa!

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  13. SandyCarlsonWed Sep 01, 09:46:00 PM EDT

    Bring on the sunshine, indeed. Damned darkness...

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  14. SandyCarlsonWed Sep 01, 09:46:00 PM EDT

    Bring on the sunshine, indeed. Damned darkness...

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  15. JimWed Sep 01, 10:29:00 PM EDT

    I'm here by the name of Sunshine.
    Sunshine back home was an out-of-his-generation hippy who lived in a tent on a neighboring farmers farm. He was the grandson of my Dad's old schoolhood girl friend. About half the time Sunshine's lady friend lived there in the tent also.

    This is a nice haiku, Nessa. I've been scarce around the visiting places over the last week and more.
    But we are here for a little while now. I won't stay gone for so long anymore until I leave again.
    ..

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  16. KBThu Sep 02, 12:02:00 AM EDT

    I'll send you some sunshine.

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  17. GattinaThu Sep 02, 02:05:00 AM EDT

    I could never write a Haiku, I am far too much a chatter box !

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  18. Together We SaveThu Sep 02, 11:19:00 AM EDT

    Wonderful job!! Bring on the sunshine!

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  19. G-ManThu Sep 02, 01:46:00 PM EDT

    I know a Lady
    This girl can write her Ass off!!!
    Vanessa Kilmer.....

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  20. EdenFri Sep 03, 08:38:00 AM EDT

    Bring on the sunshine!

    It has been raining here....

    Nice Haiku

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