Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Respect

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 heavy black storm clouds
knifing rain from ripping winds 
trivial humans
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Thank-you everyone for all of your wonderful comments and birthday wishes on Nicholas' post. 
He had a great time. 



Write a haiku based on the week’s theme.
“The basics: Haiku is simple! It is 3 non-rhyming lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively (a great way to use your fingers!)”
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21 comments:

  1. AnonymousWed Sep 22, 12:25:00 AM EDT

    Excellent. Well said and done. Always respect our waters :)

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  2. ZuzanaWed Sep 22, 02:52:00 AM EDT

    Trivial humans indeed...
    Have a lovely Wednesday;)
    xo

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  3. AnonymousWed Sep 22, 05:53:00 AM EDT

    So beautiful and full of awareness :) Great job!

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherWed Sep 22, 06:55:00 AM EDT

    Those two words "knifing rain" rip right into me!

    With All Due Respect

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  5. Brian MillerWed Sep 22, 06:59:00 AM EDT

    ha. love the last line...in the grand scheme of things, yes...

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  6. JeanieWed Sep 22, 08:27:00 AM EDT

    Creative and true. We can't match Mother Nature.

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  7. VictoriaWed Sep 22, 08:49:00 AM EDT

    Hi Nessa..beautiful, deep and stirring...love it!

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  8. Alice AudreyWed Sep 22, 11:41:00 AM EDT

    Trivial humans indeed.

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  9. MelliWed Sep 22, 11:55:00 AM EDT

    We ARE trivial... so trivial... and yet... SO blessed!

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  10. IrizWed Sep 22, 12:32:00 PM EDT

    this is my first time to hear about it. haiku must be very exciting and creative.

    nice one dear! have a great day!

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  11. Noe Noe Girl...A Queen of all Trades.Wed Sep 22, 01:38:00 PM EDT

    Very Nice Nessa.
    This trivial human is praying for rain!
    <><

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  12. Ed & JeanneWed Sep 22, 01:39:00 PM EDT

    Sounds like Portland...

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  13. tattytiaraWed Sep 22, 06:56:00 PM EDT

    Heh. Nice!

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  14. VictoriaWed Sep 22, 07:04:00 PM EDT

    Perfect. The words seem like they are meant to be together.
    Victoria

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  15. Amanda MooreWed Sep 22, 07:16:00 PM EDT

    awesome shot, love the contrasty look Nessa. We have to respect the weather so powerful......

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  16. K.PeteWed Sep 22, 07:30:00 PM EDT

    Love this one!! :)

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  17. Arts Web ShowThu Sep 23, 04:35:00 AM EDT

    Wow, great and very true haiku.
    nice one

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  18. Bing YapThu Sep 23, 07:33:00 AM EDT

    what a powerful and insightful haiku! well done!

    Respect (Haiku)

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  19. Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog?Thu Sep 23, 07:38:00 AM EDT

    Indeed, we are trivial when it comes to the forces of nature! Well done Nessa!!

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  20. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallThu Sep 23, 10:39:00 AM EDT

    very smart take,
    thought provoking.

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  21. SandyCarlsonFri Sep 24, 10:47:00 PM EDT

    We are more trivial than we want to admit!

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