Friday, August 06, 2010

Flash 55 – Oopsie


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That must’ve been some party.
Why do you say that?
Look at the bruises.
I fell down.
That’s what I mean.
It’s not what you think.
I think you must’ve had a really “good time” because you fell down.
I did have a good time but not when I fell down. I was completely sober.
Write a story in exactly 55 words.
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21 comments:

  1. While sober? That makes it doubly painful...ouch!

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  2. so what did you do? and you are ok now?

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  3. so what did you do? and you are ok now?

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  4. Two left feet can be a problem.
    I hope that you aren't too sore.
    But your misstep does make for a Friday Funfest inspiration!
    Excellent 55 My Dear, I'm so glad you played today, I was just about to come looking for you..
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  5. Ouch, that must have hurt! Great to see your post again, Nessa. Have a wonderful week.

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  6. Boy, you did take a good fall, didn't you? That must have hurt, and I say that from experience.

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  7. That looks painful. But nicely done :-)

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  8. Ah-hah! So drinking really DOES kill the pain! (You'd still have felt it later though)

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  9. LOL! THAT sounds like one of MY kid's stories!

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  10. OUCH!!! With your history of Woo Woo's you think I'm buying this story? pffft. Well done my friend :)

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  11. Feeling a bit klutzy? Hope it heels quickly.

    My 55 is here. I kind of turned my front page into an ad, so skip that.

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  12. ohhh... that doesn't look good.
    but if the party was worth it...

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  13. Now there was your mistake. Had you been drunk you wouldn't have gotten hurt!

    How goes the writing?

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  14. That looks very painful - not much fun at all. But at least there was that party and this 55 to make up for it!

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  15. WoW! That must have hurt! I hope you are okay!

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  16. Sorry about your fall, i hope it is all healed by now.
    Have a lovely weekend,
    xo

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  17. Ouch! Right on the knee cap. I bet you never knew a knee-cap moves as often as it does eh, until you do something like that to it?

    --a G-Man Fan

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  18. I am thrilled to have you back...
    great 55.

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