Thursday, June 17, 2010

Thursday 13 – A Love Story Gone Wrong

Johnny showed up at my house on Thursday,


With a message from his boss in the form of medical traction.


My arms in desperate pain, I protested any infraction.


“The love potion you sold him failed.”


“Impossible,” I wailed.


“Did he drink it at midnight on the dot?”


“Right on the witching hour’s spot.”


“Did he stand naked under the full moon?”


“Just like a love hungry loon.”


“Did he gaze upon his lady love?”


“Yes, the woman as sweet as a turtle dove.”


“Sounds as if the potion passes.”


“No, she wore mirrored sunglasses.”

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21 comments:

  1. Tracie NallThu Jun 17, 01:22:00 AM EDT

    Poor guy! lol

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  2. Alice AudreyThu Jun 17, 02:06:00 AM EDT

    Narcissis in female form?

    I swiped something from you. Let me know if I should take it down.

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  3. Shelley MunroThu Jun 17, 02:43:00 AM EDT

    Aw, that really wrecked his evil plan. Poor guy.

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  4. RAThu Jun 17, 02:50:00 AM EDT

    LOL So much for the effort. The lady seems smarter than him.

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  5. quillyThu Jun 17, 03:05:00 AM EDT

    Well, at least he's found someone who will never leave him! Unless, of course, he drops the mirror! LOL!

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  6. ZuzanaThu Jun 17, 03:53:00 AM EDT

    Oh, poor guy.;) And a smart girl.;)
    I loved the movie *Love Potion #9*.;)
    Have a great day,
    xoxo

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  7. UnknownThu Jun 17, 05:32:00 AM EDT

    What a fun prose to read..."mirrored sunglasses"-perfect foil to the plan!

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  8. anthonynorthThu Jun 17, 06:10:00 AM EDT

    That was great fun :-)

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  9. Hootin AnniThu Jun 17, 06:36:00 AM EDT

    Can I say it? I LOVED your Love Potion Prose!! How excellent, and lots of fun AND humor...a perfect mix.

    Come join me and read my Thursday post of you can. It's HERE

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  10. Brian MillerThu Jun 17, 08:00:00 AM EDT

    haha. loved your twist nd the rhyme scheme...

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  11. UnknownThu Jun 17, 08:07:00 AM EDT

    Awesome! Very clever prose.
    Happy T13!

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  12. Doug The UnaThu Jun 17, 08:32:00 AM EDT

    Fantastic. I thought that was just great.

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  13. I am HarrietThu Jun 17, 08:42:00 AM EDT

    Yikes- bummer for someone :)


    Have a great Thursday!
    http://harrietandfriends.com/2010/06/remembering-dad-fathers-day-centennial-june-20-2010/

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  14. IrishcodaThu Jun 17, 09:53:00 AM EDT

    LOL, cute one!

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  15. PattiKenThu Jun 17, 10:00:00 AM EDT

    Ah-ha-ha! I love this. Very cute!

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  16. jillconyersThu Jun 17, 10:58:00 AM EDT

    Enjoyed reading this. Poor guy.

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  17. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallThu Jun 17, 04:24:00 PM EDT

    you cracked me up!
    Cheers!

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  18. Ronda LaveenThu Jun 17, 06:59:00 PM EDT

    OH, for the love of our own reflection.

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  19. Claudya MartinezThu Jun 17, 08:36:00 PM EDT

    Funny stuff!

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  20. Noe Noe Girl...A Queen of all Trades.Mon Jun 21, 11:19:00 AM EDT

    You're a riot!
    <><

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  21. Americanising DesiMon Jun 21, 01:37:00 PM EDT

    hahaha that was some good fun :)

    check mine at http://bit.ly/bNGC3a

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