Ever feel like you’re just one step out of sync with the world? Like a shadow on an old television show?
I’m visiting my daughter this weekend. Hopefully, by February 1st my psyche will be realigned with the rotation of the earth. If not, I will continue to float in a gossamer no man's land.
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Not really a story, Mr. know-It-All, but it is in 55.
Flash 55 is hosted by G-Man (Mr. Knowitall). The idea is to write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you’ve posted your 55. Thanks G-man for hosting.
I guess we all feel like that sometimes.
ReplyDeleteI definitely feel like that sometimes!
ReplyDeleteYou'd better be careful about going to Dr. Doo Doo.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we all just need a BREAK Nessa! It's okay! Have fun with your daughter! (and that grandbaby I suppose...) :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent and vivid!
ReplyDeleteI think it is a great 55 story, as it is a real one.;) Have a nice weekend,
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Zuzana
I hope you have a great visit. Nice 55 story.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah I know that feeling well.
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Nice 55! I will be back for more!
ReplyDeleteVanessa...It can't be THAT bad!
ReplyDeleteCan it?
Excellent 55 My Dear.
All of us parents sure know your trepidations.
Thank you for this fine contribution, and please have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
hope the rest of the month goes well for you and february be a fresh start...nice 55. smiles.
ReplyDeleteSounds like you need to get grounded. Maybe seeing your dd will do it for you.
ReplyDeleteI think it was a great 55, I think we all feel that way sometimes and it's nice to know we're not alone.
ReplyDeleteits nice just to float sometimes. Visiting your daughter is always a nice thing to do and she will halt the float most likely.... mine would anyway. Ha ha.
ReplyDelete:) if there's one thing i've learned is that we're all different and yet we're all the same. thanks for visiting my blog!
ReplyDeleteOh I've so been there - and may still be there -- maybe I've just gotten used to the gossamer?
ReplyDeleteHope you feel better. :)
Every new month, or day for that matter, is a chance for a fresh start. Great 55!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting mine right HERE
Great 55, I've felt like that at times too, as though disconnected from reality as it temporarily warps around me.
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is HERE
I feel your pain...really...realignment in progress...
ReplyDeleteSandi
But it is a story. Your personal story.
ReplyDeleteGreat job of evoking a familiar feeling in a limited number of words. It is certainly a feeling that we all have at times.
ReplyDeleteI often feel like that. I hope your visit is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteStill digging this idea.
ReplyDeleteOh yes! i'm constantly out of touch!
ReplyDeleteHave fun visiting your daughter!
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Have a nice visit! When you get back how about another report on hubby? Thanks.
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It's that baby, isn't it? We aren't as cute as he is, so we lose out. Come on, who have you known longer? ;)
ReplyDeleteOr in your case, no woman's land. Hope February makes things better.
ReplyDeleteYou conveyed the feeling well in just 55!
ReplyDeleteHere's to February 1st bringing that realignment!
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteThe instructor of the writing class that I am attending mentioned flash fiction. I was able to nod knowingly. But if it weren't for blog reading I NEVER would have known what it was.
I hope you've had a great weekend!